Ok well here is the new Brian. I spose it's similar to the old one, though hopefully a little better. I dunno. You decide.
I'm not sure what to pick tho--black or coloured outline?
Be as critical as you like, as I'm trying to make this chapter better and obviously graphics play a big part.
Nice work ! I like it way better without the black line, It looks uh... smoother. The black line does make the character stand out more but did you even want it to? Yeah, I'd go with the second one. If it doesn't stand out enough darken the coloured outline a little bit, just not black, it looks to jaggered and sort of messy.
Well that pic of Brian I drew yesterday...so sometime in the next century I estimate I know by now the 2nd chapter should be out, but I kept debating whether to do or not for months as I wasn't sure how many were interested in seeing more.
During that time I restarted it several times too, different graphics etc. But it seems the latest one has some good responses, so I think I'm ready to begin
Sorry to answer your question: I work quite quickly, but I'm not sure how my uni timetable/socialising works out yet. I might just get up early and do an hour a day or something. I'll get there eventually
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! I like it way better without the black line, It looks uh... smoother. The black line does make the character stand out more but did you even want it to? Yeah, I'd go with the second one. If it doesn't stand out enough darken the coloured outline a little bit, just not black, it looks to jaggered and sort of messy.
